We have the power to make people feel great with our positive comments, so we need to make sure we don’t upset the blogger with a negative comment. We used the programme Make Beliefs Comix to make a comic strip about a quality blog comment. It was fun but a little bit challenging to make the comic strip. Have a read of our comic strips. Do they make you feel proud?

Persuasive Writing

Kia ora, over the past few weeks in class we have been learning about persuasive writing. I hope you enjoy reading my persuasive writing below.

Hi my name is Tama. I am going to be talking about why we should have better technology in the world.

I think there should be more technology for new games like updates on little big snake. and a new type of Technology a Ps5 hopefully it comes out soon would be awesome

Facts about technology
1.  570 new websites are made every year.

2. 200,000 people use the internet every minute

Now think about my reasons and why these ideas could change the world.

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